Going to a party with my friends, getting up as early as I can. But later that day I got to my friends house and my friends said it's your turn to drive us there. As I got into the car, putting my seat belts on. As we got to the light getting ready for a right turn.
"Use your turn signal," my friend reminded me.
"No one's coming," I replied. "It doesn't matter. It might help those behind you," my friend yelled at me repeatedly.
Chastened, I turned around to my other friends in the back seat and said,"I am turning right up ahead.
I like your story but your first sentence is a bit fought and hat to understand. Also in you're missing some commas in your story. Some of your sentences are missing words, so you might want to mumble read your story.
ReplyDeleteIt was confusing to me. I feel it could have had some more detail to it.
ReplyDeleteI like your story but it's a little confusing. I kind of got lost of the meaning.
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