Climb Mt. Cupcake and chop a trunk to win a prize. Me and Bob starring at the sign. "Should we do this?" Bob questioned me.
"Are you crazy!" I yelled
"No," Bob replied.
"Let's do this," we aforementioned. Partly up I looked terror stricken seeing the height of the red paper around. Finally, we made it up hasting to the axe before anyone could get their and cutting the trunk was the longest second of excitement that I have to wait. Hoary we did it we won cheering of excitement we won 1 penny the best prize we ever won.
This was a very interesting 100WC, but I got confused in some parts.
ReplyDeleteMaybe try reading it out loud to get it a bit more fluent.
After "Should we do this," you need to put a question mark. The "Partly up" part is a little bit confusing I think you should go over and mumble read it. Otherwise it sound pretty good.
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