Thursday, 14 April 2016

100 WC #13

It was an October day with warm weather. I was at the playground. I was sitting at the table and noticed there was these ants under the table. They already got on my feet so I shrugged them off and I notice this ant bit me I didn't bother. When I got home the spot just grew and grew. After I went to the doctor and realized that I got bitten by the deadlist ant.
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  1. Negative Zero15 April 2016 at 22:31

    I think you used too much I's on your story and maybe you could add a bit more powerful language too make your story better. Good job in your story this week !

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